As we get closer to home, we meet more characters. I’m really interested how this turns out!
This page took a little longer because Benne is almost home. I like to block out subsequent pages so I can see the continuity. So this page has to make sense with the following pages.
What does home look like? Who else lives there? Does Benne have any friends or siblings? Why are the monks called the Timemonks? Was that a robot or a statue? Does Timo kill the deer?
If you’ve been following along you know I’m making it up as I go. There are notes, but no details. Just stuff like “Benne talks to her dad and then he explains what the door is and where it leads to.”
And “Don’t you dare go back there!”
Chapter 1 Benne Finds The Door Page 1
Benne and the Timemonks follows the adventures of a tribe lost in time that discovers the past is catching up with the future. The monks of the valley are keeping a secret that threatens to destroy them all. A chance discovery invades the minds and bodies of our protagonist and the animals of the forest.
Don’t forget to share! Click for Hi-Res version. Available as an e-book and printed Summer 2018 (approx).
UPDATE: 10/11/2017 – I redid the thought balloons and reduced the size of the text. The reason being I was having trouble fitting more text on subsequent pages.